7th Sea Text Review, Part 1

A Day’s Work

The second edition of 7th Sea opens with what has become traditional for certain RPGs: a short story set in the fictional world of the game. Written by Jennifer Mahr, “A Day’s Work” has everything you want in a 7th Sea adventure: adventure, comedy, romance, a thrilling chase, bar room brawl, duel in the dark, and equal opportunity swashbuckling. It’s eight pages long and sets the tone nicely. Something I appreciate here is that it is a complete story, not the first part of a story that is broken up and scattered throughout the book. Continue reading

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7th Sea Character: Myth Shepard

The 7th Sea backer preview PDF of completed text and design went out yesterday. Tonight I built my first Hero (always capitalize Hero when talking about PCs in 7th Sea) to get a feel for the system. I really like it quite a bit.

Character creation happens in nine steps. I went through them in order without reading ahead, for the most part. While not exactly quick for a first-time character generation, I was able to build a character I am enamored with and just want to play. The hardest part was the sorcery section. That threw me for a bit of a loop and involved the most revisions as I went along. (Not because I’d gotten it wrong, I don’t think, but because I refined what I wanted as I went along and read more about the sorcery.) Continue reading

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Ports of Call: Homeworlds

It’s early March and I’ve written a book this year. An entire book, start to finish. This is a big accomplishment for me because it’s my first book. It’s 40,000 words strong and was written in six weeks.

How It Happened

On January 10th, I was offered the opportunity to write a supplement for the game Bulldogs! by Galileo Games. The book is called Ports of Call: Homeworlds and was a stretch goal from the Kickstarter last year to update Bulldogs! to Fate Core. The assignment was to write 40,000 words covering as many homeworlds for alien species in the Bulldogs! universe as I could fit. The biggest challenge was the timetable – Jeremy Morgan, my editor and primary point of contact, wanted it done by the end of February.

Jeremy really is the person I have to thank for this opportunity. We’ve met briefly in person a few times but mostly I know him from Twitter – we follow many of the same people and are part of many of the same conversations. Last year he put out a call for back up writers in case scheduling conflicts came up with the writers he’d already tapped. I submitted my name and Jeremy added me to his list. That second week of January, I heard he wanted me for a gig. At the time I was suffering from a terrible head cold and agreed almost immediately, despite being under the influence of Day- and/or NyQuil. (Pro tip: when you’re married, check with your spouse before you agree to do a 40,000 word book in six weeks.)

The business portion of the project – agreeing to a rate, signing the contract, getting author materials, etc. – took a while to get running so I lost nearly two weeks before I could start writing. Once I had all that sorted, though, I took a long look at what needed to happen and worked it out with Jeremy and Brennan that I’d need another week. My new deadline was March 7th. Spoiler alert: I made my deadline.

Nuts and Bolts

My pace needed to be an average of 1,000 words a day. That’s an ambitious goal for someone who has a day job, is married, and active in local communities. I ran the X-Wing store championship for my local store in February. I brewed two batches of beer in the time I wrote this book. I even managed to play a game for the She’s a Super Geek podcast.

The first step was to familiarize myself with the source material. I’d read Bulldogs! before but it had been a while and I’d never played a campaign. Jeremy sent me a PDF of the Fate Core version and manuscripts for other sources I’d need. I read them all multiple times, making mental notes about what each species is like and different themes I can play with for their ports. This I was able to accomplish while other business details were being attended to; it happened in fits and starts because I was sick early in the process and we had some miscommunication along the way, probably because I wasn’t asking the right questions.

Because I’m a bit of an organizational nut, I love to use Scrivener. My first scrivening for PoC: Homeworlds was a list of each species with the homeworld and singular, plural, and adjectival forms of the species name. This would be my most common reference note as I wrote. There are about fifty species in the materials Brennan sent me. Some of those will have homeworlds represented in other books, some don’t have homeworlds, and some don’t have homeworlds suitable for visitation. That brought my total list of ports down to 36, something of a perfect number. I aimed for each port to land between 1,100 and 1,200 words. Some were more and some were less.

Then I set about creating my port template with spaces for the port name, planet of origin, climate, port description, three aspects, description of locals, and three prominent NPCs. My template was properly formatted with the header and aspect tags where necessary. The template was based off the manuscript for another Ports of Call book by Filamena Young. (Big help!)

Writing the ports was surprisingly easy. I broke it down into manageable chunks, with the goal of a port a day. That worked out to be a bit more than a thousand a day, so I banked a couple days off in the process. They were much needed.

I knew that if I tried to create an outline of 36 unique, original port ideas all at once that I’d never get it done. So instead I used a technique I’m calling a “rolling outline” where I brainstormed four port ideas and then each day I wrote a port, I’d also brainstorm a new port idea. The intent was to keep three or four port ideas in the list so I always had something to work with the next day. This worked really well! Since the ports are small-ish and mostly self-contained, I was able to let each idea percolate in my head for a few days before writing it. This also broke the brain load of ideation into small chunks. When I stuck to this pattern, I was just zipping along. Late in the game I finished a port and went to see what was next in my outline to find out I hadn’t generated any new ideas. That was panic inducing.

From there on, it was really just about the discipline of sitting and writing every night. That’s not an easy thing to do and I didn’t always want to but I did it. My wife deserves major recognition and thanks. She really stepped up to help me by planning meals, cooking, and packing my lunches. These are things I typically do around the house but on such a short deadline, it just wasn’t feasible. Ports of Call: Homeworlds wouldn’t have happened (at least not as quickly as it happened) without all of her support and hard work.

What Can We Expect in Ports of Call: Homeworlds?

The ports in the book are pretty diverse. There’s a port on an authoritarian world that is only place aliens are allowed to visit. All interstellar commerce on that planet occurs there, and is primarily concerned with contracting out the services of exceptional individuals.

Another port is a low-gravity world with enormous big game animals. Think T-Rex size. The port has a number of safari companies that will take you out to bag the big one. It’s also one of the prime destinations for extreme sports fanatics.

I wrote about a space elevator, an enormous space station, a hollowed-out asteroid with an enormous sentient mainframe, and a place where biomechanical ships are built/grown. There’s Shakespearean drama (in spaaaace!), assassin’s guilds, environmentalist protesters, Pangalactic Corporations everywhere, and even a port with mysterious werewolves.

As a Bulldog coming to one of these ports you’ll be embroiled in murder mysteries, plans for bloody vengeance, local politics (both governmental and criminal), thrilling races, daring heists, and more. You’ll be able to explore crumbling empires, failing businesses, paradise resorts, and expanding kingdoms.

The hardest port to write was the philosopher’s enclave run by hive-minded insects. My favorite is probably the port that is basically a Buddhist temple from a Shaw Bros. flick. The funniest, I hope, is the port where a species with a terrifying appearance is trying to change galactic opinion about them and have built a hilariously mismanaged tourist trap. Because it doesn’t matter how good the skiing is if the entire place is crawling with giant spiders asking if they can help you.

The species with homeworlds represented in Ports of Call: Homeworlds are Behemothians, Chan Guls, Dolomé, Eegop, Endevians, Forrszp, Gabradeen, Guloorpans, Hacragorkans, Han-To-No-Gon-La, Hikiyans, Hoodoosuns, Isilins, Keero, Ken Reeg, Lachkessen, Lassieans, Lutrani, Madribel, Mgrummen, Myriasoma, Nukimen, Ophrenics, Rangoons, Ryjyllians, Sabines, Septercians, Sishi’ik, Skuras, Telosians, Terrizans, Tetsuashans, Thalds, Undines, Vilichlopans, and Zevallia.

You will not find the Arsubarans, Saldrallans, or Templari here because they’re going to be in other books.

 Write and Live Responsibly

Coinciding with this unprecedented level of creative output, I decided that I’m kind of tired of being fat and out of shape. A gym just opened in my office building so I joined that and have been exercising every work day. Started slow because I wanted to be successful, so once I got in the habit of hitting the gym after a couple weeks I also started counting calories and restricting my diet.

The first few weeks of going to the gym was great. I was hitting my word count every day, my mood improved, and I had greater energy even though I wasn’t seeing any weight loss. Once I restricted my diet, that all changed. My energy levels and mood dropped precipitously but I lost twelve pounds in two weeks. The thing is, I couldn’t write. I found myself taking longer to write a port in the evening. What had been taking two or three hours was stretching into five. That’s on the days I was able to even muster the mental fortitude to sit down and do it. So while I was doing great on the weight loss, literally everything else crashed.

In order to finish the book, I stopped dieting the last week. I was behind schedule by about five thousand words and needed to get it done. Breakfast and lunch were still healthy, but dinners were larger and heavier than I’d been doing. Upping my calorie intake improved my energy levels and I was able to knock out the words I needed to

I was surprised at how much my diet affected my writing process. It makes sense – my brain is the source of my creativity and it’s an organ that needs energy as much as anything else. The experience really highlighted for me how terrible the starving artist trope is. I already understood that it promotes a toxic abuse of creatives by devaluing their work or by encouraging society to actively mistreat artists but I never understood before how hard it is to be creative when you are starving. And my starving wasn’t even financially motivated; I didn’t have the added stress of not knowing if I could pay rent. (My wife and I are lucky enough to be fairly financially stable with our joint income.)

How I Got Here

Getting away from the story and process of writing this book, I want to talk about “making it” in the hobby, insofar as I have had some success.

The question I’ve asked myself a number of times over the past few months is: “How did I get a book deal?” I’ve given it a lot of thought and it all comes down to this: I know people, they know me, and I’ve worked up the courage to put myself out there. None of it was easy and it all started by a chance introduction.

Over the past eight years I’ve been developing connections in the RPG community. I’m on friendly terms with a number of designers, writers, and editors. Really, that’s the key: over the course of years, I have gotten to know and get on good terms with people in the game design community.

I’m not joking or being hyperbolic about the time frame, either. After discovering Spirit of the Century in 2008, I started following Fred Hicks and Rob Donoghue on Twitter. I now freelance for them (two projects down, and the biggest so far just ramping up).

In 2010 I met Ron Edwards, who did a lot to convince me that I could write my own games. We haven’t spoken for a while but it’s impossible to be a gamer and not speak to Ron without him picking your brain about what you want in a game, which inevitably leads to brainstorming game design.

But where it really started, where I can directly trace the connections I’ve made and the success I’ve had is GenCon 2011. My friend Tim introduced me to some old friends of his – Clark and Amanda Valentine, who had just been part of the announcement for Marvel Heroic. Because of that, I started following Cam Banks and interacting with him on Twitter. In 2012 I bought a one-day pass to C2E2 so I could get a physical copy of Marvel Heroic and have it signed by Cam; we chatted at the booth and it ended up that I submitted a writing test for the Age of Apocalypse supplements. At GenCon I ran a ton of the official Marvel Heroic games.  I was laid off at the same time (literally the day before GenCon) so I wrote a first draft of Heroes Fall (which was then called Grim World).

In 2013, Margaret Weis Productions lost the Marvel license but picked up Firefly. I volunteered to GM for them and Mark Diaz Truman asked me if I would be interested in writing for Firefly as we talked about the game. Over the next two years, I worked on five books for Firefly.

In 2014 I went out on a limb and submitted for the Evil Hat writer’s search. They liked what I wrote and I came on to write Three Rocketeers. That went well, so in 2015 they added me to the Kaiju Incorporated RPG team as a system developer and Fate of Cthulhu as the lead designer.

Throughout this whole time I’ve been getting to know more and more people in the community, building connections and friendships. I’m becoming more visible in the community, for better or worse. For me, at least, it means that when Jeremy needed someone to write an entire book in six weeks I seemed like a reasonable candidate.

So if you want to get into a community, that’s the only path I know and can recommend: meet people, make friends, make things, contribute, and put yourself out there. It’s work, dammit, and hard work, at that. But you’re never going to get opportunities without the legwork.

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Review: The Force Awakens (Spoilers)

The Force Awakens is a good movie – eminently fun, beautifully filmed, and wonderfully acted. The pacing is relentless, flowing from action to action in typical Abrams style. There are only a few brief pauses for characters to reflect and process what’s happening. In this case, I feel safe saying that The Force Awakens is a non-stop thrill ride without it being hyperbole. All in all it’s a very modern take on Star Wars and that’s a good thing. Releasing a relatively slow, methodical, contemplative adventure film in the modern cinema landscape isn’t something a director can get away with anymore.

There’s a fair bit of ink spilled below on flaws the movie has. Don’t take this to mean I didn’t like the movie. I did. It’s fun, rollicking, and epic. It’s not perfect, but hardly any movies are. There needs to be a place for fans to discuss the flaws in the film as much as what they love. My final consensus is two lightsabers up.

I reiterate: this review will contain spoilers for the film. I’m also interested in discussing the movie so hit me up in the comments to know what you think. Continue reading

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Rebels in Review: Brothers of the Broken Horn

The past two episodes of Rebels showed us a remarkably mature Ezra. Brothers of the Broken Horn takes a step back to show us he’s not perfect.

Leave it to Ezra

The episode opens with Ezra training under Rex’s guidance. Kanan shows up to remind Ezra he has Jedi training to tend to, as well. The multitude of responsibilities clearly bother Ezra, to the point that he asks, “What if I don’t want to be either [a Jedi or a soldier]?” When Hera sends the rest of the rebels out to search for power generators, Ezra is ordered to stay behind and scrub the Phantom of “ion scoring” he’s neglected twice. Rather than doing his chores, Ezra responds to the distress call of the Broken Horn, a ship of known acquaintance and criminal Cikatro Vizago. What follows is a fun, little criminal romp involving three of the greatest scoundrels in Star Wars animated history: Hondo Ohnaka, Azmorigan, and Vizago. Watching the betrayals and counter-betrayals play out in rapid succession makes for a fun episode.

Fundamentally, this is a story about Ezra finding himself and coming to terms with his place in the galaxy. He ventures from unhappiness to acceptance. He hasn’t resolved his major issue – the conflict between the expectations of Rex and Kanan – but he realizes that his place is with the crew of the Ghost.

If I have a major criticism of the episode, it’s with how neatly it ties everything together with a bow. The lesson at the end is a little too tidy for my taste. It comes off a little too much like Leave it to Beaver. However, there is a lot to like in this episode. Fans of Hondo will love him in Rebels – he’s absolutely just as much of a scoundrel as he was in The Clone Wars. Jim Cummings ages up Hondo quite a bit. He sounds more ragged and tired. We can hear how he’s been through hard times. James Hong is a delight as Azmorigan. The gleeful cruelty and petty vindictiveness makes him an excellent Star Wars baddie.

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Rebels in Review: Always Two There Are

The third episode of season 2, “Always Two There Are“, gives us the first horror story in Star Wars Rebels. We got a few scary stories in The Clone Wars with zombie Geonosians. The exploration of fear has long been a theme in Star Wars – from Tarkin’s doctrine of ruling through fear to Anakin’s fear of loss in Revenge of the Sith. What better way to explore fear than a haunted house story a few days before Halloween?

The Haunted Hospital

The bulk of the action in the episode takes place on an abandoned medical station once used by the Republic. It’s similar to the ones we see used in The Clone Wars – not at all surprising – but it’s striking just how creepy the interior can be when turned into a dilapidated, abandoned mess of its former self.

Space can be a lonely, desolate place.
Space can be a lonely, desolate place.

Watching “Relics of the Old Republic” and “Always Two There Are” back to back is an excellent lesson in cinematography. Both episodes make great use of the camera to convey mood and tone. Where Relics emulates the slow, methodical shots of classic submarine movies for drama and tension. “Always Two There Are” uses off-kilter camera angles to create a sense of unease and disquiet.

The narrative on the station plays out in classic haunted house fashion – the characters enter a creepy, abandoned place only to slowly realize they are not alone and are, in fact, trapped with a malevolent force. Chopper chases after strange noises. Zeb gets lost in the twisting corridors. When the enemies hunting the rebels finally reveal themselves as Inquisitors, things do not go well for our heroes. They are each captured or injured in rapid succession. In the end, they manage to escape through subterfuge rather than confrontation. In combat, Ezra, Sabine, and Zeb are clearly outclassed by the Inquisitors.

The off-kilter angle is unsettling and a staple in suspense films.
The off-kilter angle is unsettling and a staple in suspense films.

The most disturbing moment of the episode for me was when a seeker droid plays Chopper like a puppet to send a distress call to the rest of the rebels. It actually really bothers me the way it sticks its pincers into Chopper’s body and starts moving things around to make Chopper talk. Seems unnecessarily gruesome to me.

Seeker droid plays Chopper like a puppet.
Seeker droid plays Chopper like a puppet.

The Inquisitorius

We first saw The Fifth Brother at the end of “Relics of the Old Republic” in a brief scene as he arrives on board Admiral Konstantine’s Star Destroyer. This episode sees him in action and also introduces a second Inquisitor hunting the rebels: The Seventh Sister.

The two are substantially different. The Fifth Brother is rash and quick to violence, relying on his size and power. He is direct and immediate. While in action he is constantly in motion, never stopping. In quieter moments of reflection he sits stock still.

The Seventh Sister is more calculating, devious, and manipulative. Where The Fifth Brother simply wants to kill Ezra, The Seventh Sister plans to use him as a means to a greater goal – Ahsoka Tano. Her fighting style emphasizes her agility and speed more than power. She also relies on her small army of seeker droids to gain the upper hand.

Physically, their movements seem inspired by animals. Fifth Brother’s slow, purposeful meandering turns into a sudden, violent burst of speed. It reminds me of a shark patrolling its waters. Seventh Sister is more angular and unsettling in her movements – she perches with her knees akimbo and weaves her lightsaber in an eerie pattern as she stalks forward. It’s hard not to compare her to a spider.

Working together, the Inquisitors can stop a ship.
Working together, the Inquisitors can stop a ship.

Both Inquisitors wield personalized versions of the spinning double-bladed lightsaber we saw The Grand Inquisitor wield last season – Seventh Sister reveals that Jason Isaacs’ character was The Grand Inquisitor of the Inquisitorius.

What is fascinating about the Inquisitors is that they are shown to be in competition with one another. “The kill is mine!” Fifth Brother declares when Seventh Sister stops him from cleaving Ezra in twain. Seventh Sister even states that the death of The Grand Inquisitor presented opportunities to the rest of them. There are clear plays for dominance between the two of them through their interactions.

The most telling thing about the Inquisitors is Kanan’s reaction when Ezra reports their existence. Kanan is shaken and speechless. Hera covers for him, deflecting the conversation neatly back toward military procedure, but Kanan is clearly rattled. I love this moment – Kanan losing the bravado and cocksure attitude he’s had through most of the series is very honest. More still, we see Hera step in to comfort him. Seeing them react to one another in such an emotional moment leads me to believe more than ever that they are a couple – it’s just not made to be a big deal or defining element of the characters.

A tender and romantic moment of comfort.
A tender and romantic moment of comfort.

Character Arcs

Sabine Takes Command. This is the first time we see an official rebel mission underway without Hera or Kanan there to act at field commander. Sabine is tasked with recovering medical supplies and given command over Zeb and Chopper. While there isn’t much as far as tactical planning and execution, it is a sign of Hera’s trust and shows maturity on Sabine’s part.

Zeb learns wits trump brawns. As the muscle of the group, Zeb is the most likely to punch his way through a problem. Thing is, not all problems can be punched. He learns a nice object lesson in fighting smart, especially when victory means just surviving.

Ezra’s two dads. Kanan and Rex don’t get along, as we saw in the first two episodes this season. Unfortunately, the battlefield they’ve chosen for their contest of wills is Ezra’s continued training and development, a battlefield Ezra finds irksome. The two get into an argument, obviously not the first, and Ezra joins the away team rather than stay and be fought over. This seems to be a long-term source of conflict in the team. The only good thing is that as soon as there was a more serious issue, the revelation of more inquisitors, the two set aside their quarrel, Kanan and Rex can function as a team when it’s needed.

Ezra the hero. This season continues to demonstrate how far Ezra has come as a person since his introduction in Spark of Rebellion. He’s finally reached a point where he’s comfortable with the crew and welcomed as a valued member. What’s more is we see him make noble self-sacrifices in this episode. Ezra is maturing well into a good young man.

Final Analysis

This is easily the episode of the season so far and matches all but the finale of last season. Five stars.

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Campaign Pitch: Behind Enemy Lines

If I were to run an Age of Rebellion campaign, I would want to pitch it during the Clone Wars rather than the Galactic Civil War. The clones are incredibly rich characters and ripe for roleplaying.

Stranded on an Abandoned Planet

There would be room for 3-5 PCs in the campaign. One would be a Jedi padawan and the others would be clone troopers. The game would kick off after their ship is shot down during a disastrous Republic assault on a Separatist world. They are the lone survivors of a repelled invasion force. The padawan’s Jedi master has been killed. The squad’s CO died in the crash. They are alone.

Now the squad is trapped behind enemy lines and presumed dead. They must find a way to survive and escape the planet. Or perhaps they decide to complete the mission their battalion was sent to accomplish, now against impossible odds.

A Bit of Spin

Characters would be straight out of Age of Rebellion. The clones would all be human and could be any Career and Specialization in the book. The padawan would be out of Force & Destiny, with 75 additional XP. It’s not enough to reach knight level play (as outlined in the GM’s screen supplement) but it’s enough to invest in some Force powers.

The spin comes in from 13th Age. I’d give each character One Unique Thing. It’s a great bit of tech and can lead to some incredible roleplay. The hope here is that the characters would do fun, interesting things like the Bad Batch. My dwarf monk in the 13th Age game I’ve been playing has the One Unique Thing of “First dwarf born of stone in Ages.” It’s been great fodder for plot hooks, Icon relationships, and characterization. Like 13th Age, it would be a narrative tool but I may throw in a bit of a mechanical hack where players can spend a light side Destiny Point to do something cool related to their One Unique Thing.

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Rebels in Review: Relics of the Old Republic

Echo station 3-T-8, we have spotted Imperial walkers.
Echo station 3-T-8, we have spotted Imperial walkers.

Last week’s episode, The Lost Commanders, was mostly spent setting up conflicts for the second season of Rebels. It was a bit light on action but measured in its pace. It took time to let the characters simply exist in their situation. The same cannot be said for the second episode the season. Relics of the Old Republic hit the ground running and didn’t so much as stop to breathe.

There are spoilers for the episode below. Continue reading

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Episode VII Schedule

I imagine it’s possible I could be more excited for The Force Awakens but I’m not sure how. Last night was a frenzy of ticket buying, scheduling, consulting with friends, and downed web servers. I knew I wanted to do the Star Wars Marathon, a showing with my wife, and try to get to IMAX in opening weekend. These three were necessarily mutually exclusive. Anna didn’t want to do the marathon. 18 hours leading up to the main event is too much, especially when it starts at 01:00. All the IMAX showings I could find were in 3D and, honestly, we both prefer 2D cinema. So. Minimum three showings in the opening weekend. (I will likely try to finagle more.)

In the end, I got tickets to my preferred theatre for the Star Wars Marathon for myself and two friends (also hardcore Star Wars fans), tickets for Friday at 12:30 for Anna and I, and tickets for Saturday morning at a Regal IMAX (fulfilling both the IMAX desire AND getting us a nifty collector’s edition BB-8 art ticket). Sundays at AMC theatres there’s another promotion for a free poster. I’ll try to swing that one but it will be dependent upon how I feel after three days living at the cinema.

Marathon Schedule




A NEW HOPE 10:15




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Rebels in Review: The Lost Commanders


This is going to be the first of a weekly series where I review the most recent episode of Star Wars Rebels. As a contributor to addisonrecorder.com, I’m writing reviews bi-weekly. Reviewing Rebels seems like a good way to keep exercising those skills I’m developing.

Spoiler Policy

I will do my best to avoid spoilers. Where I can’t avoid them, I will be sure to put a spoiler warning at the top of the article. 

The Lost Commanders

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The Phantom approaches the clones’ modified AT-TE.

The second season proper of Star Wars Rebels wastes no time setting the stage for big conflicts and story arcs. Commander Sato’s fledgling rebellion is on the run from the Empire – the destruction of their flagship has left them too weak to fight. They need a hidden location to use as a base of operations. The crew of the Ghost is dispatched to find an old acquaintance of Ahsoka Tano’s who may know of such a place. This brings Kanan face to face with a trio of clone troopers, reminding him of the terrible events we saw in Kanan: The Last Padawan. Kanan doesn’t react well to the clones nor they to him. It will be a touch-and-go relationship.  Ahsoka splits off from the fleet to investigate the mysterious Sith Lord Darth Vader. “There are questions. Questions that need answering,” she tells Kanan and Ezra. Lastly, the clones decline to join the Rebellion. Though he hates the Empire, Rex is weary of war and has no desire to get involved in another one. Ezra seems determined to change his mind.

The episode if chock full of story, but it’s a bit light on action, moving along by dialogue. To its credit, the exposition is handled well by being featured in strong character moments. Freddie Prinze, Jr. turns in a stellar performance when Kanan breaks down and talks about Order 66 and why he distrusts the clones. Ezra continues to grow as a leader among the rebels – he took point on diplomacy with the clones and no one so much as batted an eye. He’s come a long way from the Loth-rat of a kid everyone picked on.

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The Ghost approaches orbit around Seelo.

My only real complaint with this episode is that Hera was sidelined. The Ghost’s hyperdrive shorted out when they arrived in orbit around Seelos. She and Chopper remained aboard to fix it while the story happened dirtside. I hope it sets her up to be the hero next episode but for now it’s a bit irksome.


The animation of Rebels has always been beautiful. The sweeping majesty of the plains of Lothal, inspired by Ralph McQuarrie, are just sublime. What I appreciated in “The Lost Commanders” is the facial expressions. The animators are getting incredibly sophisticated with what they can do. Particularly with Ahsoka, we get some great, subtle moments conveyed only through facial expressions. It’s hard to believe that animation this complex can also be so subtle and affective.

Ahsoka cracks a wry smile over Ezra's exuberance.
Ahsoka cracks a wry smile over Ezra’s exuberance.

In addition, I’d like to nominate whomever draws the clouds in Rebels for a special Best Animation of Clouds Emmy award because, hot damn, have the clouds in both seasons been phenomenal. Last year we got the swirling, voluminous clouds of Lothal. Last night we got the wispy, stretched clouds of Seelos. I’ve paused multiple episodes just to look at the clouds.

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The clouds actually make the desert look kind of nice.

Tell Me of Your Homeworld, Usul

This episode features a new desert planet – called Seelos – with blasted, cracked earth rather than the rolling dunes of Tatooine. There they seek the help of the desert dwelling nomads and must undergo a ritual involving the capture of an enormous worm, eventually winning the respect of those they came to find.

It all sounds more than a bit like the first third of the book Dune – and since the episode ended with a “To be continued…” we may well have more Dune-inspired Star Wars ahead of us.

Dave Filoni drew upon the cinema canon during The Clone Wars, entire story arcs are homages to classic films. I think we’re seeing a literary homage in “The Lost Commanders.” Granted, there have been several film adaptations of Dune over the years but the visuals on display more closely match the covers from the novel’s original publication in Analog. Filtered through a McQuarrie-esque sensibility, to be sure, but still reminiscent.

Dune Analog Cover
Cover of Analog, March 1965

Frank Herbert’s Dune had an impact on the original Star Wars. Narrative similarities between the stories come from their similarly mythic storytelling. Both are a classic hero’s journey and feature a young man triumphing against impossible odds. Large portions of both stories take place upon a desert world inhabited by dangerous, mysterious nomads. There are even parallels between the Herbert’s Bene Gesserit and mentats and Lucas’ Jedi. I seem to recall an interview with George Lucas where he discussed the impact Dune had upon him but I can’t remember the specifics.

The Joopa "Big Bongo." Kanan for scale.
The joopa “Big Bongo.” Kanan for scale.

In the joopa hunting scene we were a single shouted, “Worm sign!” from Arrakis. Every space opera epic since Dune has needed a sandworm. Mass Effect has its Thresher Maws. Now Star Wars has the joopa (arguably, in addition to the space slug and the sarlaac). Beyond the cosmetic similarities, there are thematic ties to the sandworms of Dune.

First is the space the joopa occupies in the narrative of the episode: the newcomers must prove their worth to the desert people in a trial of the worm. In Dune, of course, this is when Paul calls a great worm and uses his maker hooks to keep it from submerging so it can be used as a mount. Thus he is finally accepted fully as a Fremen. In Rebels, Ezra, Sabine, and Zeb all play key parts in bagging “Big Bongo” for Gregor. Ezra even uses a pair of staves to get Bongo to surface, in a corollary to Paul’s maker hooks.

Second is the symbiotic nature between the desert people (the clones) and the worm. Gregor says that catching a joopa can feed them for a year – it’s a major food source and likely economic windfall for the clones. The Fremen in Dune worship the sandworms as gods and much of their culture is based around the massive creatures. The clones’ survival is as tied to the joopa as the Fremen’s survival is tied to the sandworm.

If “The Clone Commanders” really is the first episode in an arc inspired by Dune, the next two episodes ought to be exciting. That’s when all the really crazy action and revelations happen. We all have to temper our enthusiasm, though. Our little band of Rebels isn’t about to topple the Empire and dethrone the Emperor the way Paul Muad’dib and the Fremen of Sietch Tabr did by the end of Dune. We know how that happens.

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